The figure for all the text fits, if it were a natural part of blogging landscape. The only thing I

Incredibly surprised me a warning 6 gallon carboy about the content. Could have been stronger pieces? I saw that the Evaluation of "Yaoi 6 gallon carboy Shelf" took it. If, indeed, your story is about a homosexual relationship, did you get it right, because I have nothing to something. You have to be tolerant and co.
When I saw the address to mind immediately occurred to me that maybe it's something with a kind of fantasy, 6 gallon carboy maybe even science fiction. On the other hand, it can also be quite moral tale, ordinary girl leaves the gray reality to become someone else? The possibilities are many, everything will come out in the wash. However, once zaciekawiłaś me.
By the way, I read your blog evaluation elsewhere, and promises to be quite a nice score. Only thing is ... While evaluating the Sincere and Righteous says something about the header and the "recommended", I do not see it ...
"The reality is sometimes elusive" - try to work out a sentence in terms of logic. Did you mean that in the world around us is constantly scrolls 6 gallon carboy lie? Yes? I hope, for another logical meaning I can think of. Point for you, the inscription on the bar forces you to think about.
Blog draped in dark, very dark blue, white, and orange, fading to brown ... Rage does not, so to speak yet. Widywało better. The more that there is no header ...
You have no head or what I do not see? Immediately check on two other computers in my house, my phone and my uncle also goes into motion. My friend also involved in the testing. It was completely unnecessary, because for the first time there were no irregularities. The balls are flying? But the header is the first thing the reader sees! He affects a quarter of a decision - to read or not. If you do not know, it's you I realize that the blog does not only consist of text on it is stated. It also aesthetic, look. Very, very important point. If you can not do takowego header recommend szabloniarnie, or even a hobby for someone dealing with graphics. You can even ask the Black Rose, our ocenialni. Our headline is its authorship. Even the last resort is the title of the site header! Unfortunately, 6 gallon carboy the headline is half points to admit the "Graphic Art"
Colors ... You went to the sitter. You chose black, white, and orange 6 gallon carboy bordered with brown. The combination of the first two colors is so popular and unoriginal as to be a headache. I advise you to think of another statement. It is important that the letters were legible, will not get lost in the background. The black matches all colors and multiple connections is much better, than the present. I have no idea how he fits you there is orange. Completely not appeal 6 gallon carboy to me, but as we all know, tastes are different.
The figure for all the text fits, if it were a natural part of blogging landscape. The only thing I there completely unresponsive and in your place as soon as possible wyrzuciłabym, I guess button, or something similar, on the other side of the blog. Not suitable for cholera there, and if it actually button, I advise you to put it somewhere else. And that as soon as possible.
To begin with, it completely surprised me. My visions of the Prince and the Cat looks completely 6 gallon carboy different looks. And here's bum! The sudden turn of events. Point for you. I did not expect this kidnapping. But other than that ... Not sucked me a story. So I read because I have to, but I do not especially want to. Maybe it's just that I rarely draw such stories ... Anyway, you're not doing any crazy with the story. It is itself, because it is.
Your way of writing is not unique. I suppose if I was introduced to your writing, accompanied by two others, it does not have recognized your work. In each of the eight chapters, you wrote the same - your style or has not improved or worsened.
Action "Prince" takes place in a medieval land, the created by you. In terms of logical everything is perfect. I do not know why, but I tried to imagine the kingdom of the Prince, 6 gallon carboy his mind's eye I see the castle from Gumisiów XD
The only character whose attitude is deeper psychologically and emotionally, is Victor. Gives the impression of a child at the same time, the unconscious consequences of actions, and an adult male (who is) the perfect strategist, having their own explanation for everything and every allegation reply. There are so sure of himself that is not afraid to escape the Prince, the consequences of kidnapping.
Prince is extremely shallow character. It is easy to create, her every move is easy to carry